Plummeting to Earth

This goes along with my earlier picture, Lightning in the Storm Clouds. Raven, plummeting to Earth, unconscious and smoking, after being struck by lightning, only to be caught by Brice, her unspoken attraction.

I'm quite proud of this. I didn't use any guides or references. Only my own imagination and skill. I know the lighting is still off, but that's my scanner, crappy as always. You can't see her hands because her sleeves are covering them(I also couldn't draw them right.. ).

Constructive criticism welcome!